Book Review: Better Together by Christine Riccio

**Disclaimer: I received a free electronic ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.**
Genre:  YA, Contemporary, Romance
Release Date: June 1, 2021  
Description:

"Freaky Friday meets The Parent Trap in this sparkling and heartfelt story about sisters, second chances, finding romance, and finding yourself.

Jamie’s an aspiring standup comic in Los Angeles with a growing case of stage anxiety.

Siri’s a stunning ballerina from New Jersey nursing a career-changing injury.

They’ve both signed up for the same session at an off the grid Re-Discover Yourself Retreat in Colorado. When they run into each other, their worlds turn upside down.

Jamie and Siri are sisters, torn apart at a young age by their parent's volatile divorce. They’ve grown up living completely separate lives: Jamie with their Dad and Siri with their Mom. Now, reunited after over a decade apart, they hatch a plot to switch places. It’s time they get to know and confront each of their estranged parents.

With an accidental assist from some fortuitous magic, Jamie arrives in New Jersey, looking to all the world like Siri, and Siri steps off her flight sporting a Jamie glamour.

The sisters unexpectedly find themselves stuck living in each other's shoes. Soon Siri's crushing on Jamie's best friend Dawn. Jamie's falling for the handsome New Yorker she keeps running into, Zarar. Alongside a parade of hijinks and budding romance, both girls work to navigate their broken family life and the stresses of impending adulthood."

I will be straightforward with this. I am a subscriber of Christine on YouTube and I did read her debut novel, which I will admit I did not enjoy. Of course, that was her first book so I assume her writing will improve in her next work. Just like "Again, But Better" I will not be biased when writing this review. Unfortunately, I also did not enjoy "Better Together" either. 

I will like to say the characters did not stand out at all to me. Both Siri and Jamie's perspectives were boring to me, just like the rest of the story. Usually, when there are multiple perspectives it's pretty common for me to prefer one over the other, but not in this case. I'm not going to lie, but I really struggled to finish this book. First off, Jamie's career is to be a stand-up comedienne, but I failed to find any of her jokes or humor funny. Her personality also seemed too...extra. Nothing's wrong with having a loud character, but I don't think she was written well. Now Siri (yeah, it was a poor choice of a name), she complained a bit too much. She was the younger of the sisters, but she was eighteen but acted like a fifteen-year-old. Also, her replacing F-bombs with the word "intercourse" or her replacing s**t with "excrement" got annoying real quick...like real quick. Overall, if you're a subscriber to Christine and you know her personality, you can sense that Jamie and Siri are like two different parts of Christine. Like, some of the similarities are blatantly obvious to me. I guess in a way it is a bit like the self-insertion problem that she has with her first book. 

Now, for the romance. Zarar was Jamie's love interest, while Dawn was Siri's. While Zarar was a nice guy, he liked Jamie way too fast. Because of this, the romance between him and Jamie seemed very disingenuine. Siri and Dawn had a slightly better romance in my opinion. I also appreciated the LGBT representation that they brought to the story. 

Just like in Christine's first book, there was also magic in this book as well. Was the magic in this one done well? No, not really.  It just conveniently occurred in the beginning right before Siri and Jamie were planning on switching places that made their appears swap. And also again they just happened to conveniently sneeze glitter bombs onto their love interests, which allowed them to see the true sister. It was all just too convenient, but at the same time, made no sense at all. Even when it's revealed why it happened, you're still left wondering...why?

Something from Christine's first book that really annoyed me was her constant cultural references. I get in her first book they were used to establish the different time periods (even though it wasn't done well), she still went a bit overboard in this one as well. Don't get me wrong, she dialed back a bit compared to "Again, But Better", but there were still quite a lot. Speaking of her first book, Shane and Pilot make a cameo in this book. That's it. Just a cameo.

Overall, I didn't enjoy my experience with this book, but it doesn't mean I'm giving up on Christine as a writer. I'll most likely give her more chances in the future for her other works, but I do hope her writing improves and her ideas are more original. 

Overall rating:  1/5